033 - Phil Gets Notes On A Script - Screenwriters Need To Hear This with Michael Jamin

In this special episode Phil Hudson, my co-host, get notes on a spec pilot he wrote. That's not all; he's also sharing his script prior to my notes and his re-write so you can see how those notes are received and applied. This is a good one, so pay close attention.

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