Story Time: A terrible fantasy story written by an asshole

Thought I'd try a new series, whenever I find the time. I'll be reading potentially funny-bad books and taking the piss out of them.

Please let me know how this one fairs. I'm not used to this kind of content, so I'm being a little experimental with it, let me know if I can do anything better. :)

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