Sonic Advance Tails Story “Not your Dads Green Hill Zone” Commentated

This is the commentated series I was talking about in one of the update videos. Please let me know how I can improve.
Bible Verse Psalms 100:2 and 3
2. Serve the Lord with gladness: come before his presence with singing.
3. Know ye that the Lord he is God: it is he that hath mad us, and not we ourselves; we are his people, and the sheep of his pasture.