having a "ThiS iS rEaL, tHiS Is mE" moment #originalmusic #singing

if i can figure out what the heck the rest of the song could be i'll definitely be making a full version lol. is this a verse or a chorus? i don't even know haha.

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songwriting over a beat made by RJ Pasin on tiktok. i sampled a beat and wrote a new original song over it. what do you think? should i drop it or release it? i did a songwriting challenge with the best lyrics i've ever written. would you listen to it if i put it on spotify? it's kind of a pop rock sound like paramore or olivia rodrigo. if you like ruth b or melanie martinez, owl city, or bella poarch, you might like my music! melanie martinez is a huge songwriting inspiration to me! i love concept albums and wordplay. these are the best lyrics of my entire life. should i release this new song? my favorite lyrics ever. would you be interested in a full song? is this the verse or the chorus? i just wrote this new song and lyrics and i think i might have written my best song so far!! i think these are the best lyrics i've ever written. writing can be a challenge but i'm extremely happy with how it turned out. should i release it on spotify? i just wrote my best song ever with my best lyrics. should i drop it? writing a hit song out of hate comments and tweets! watch as this ordinary singer SHOCKS the judges while singing in a stairwell. just wait til you hear the chorus. watch as my family and friends react to my original song! they didn't know it was me singing! sometimes you find people with unexpected voices. can you tell who's singing?