Let's Fix ALPHACORE #1: Second Act Slump

(NOTE: The title of this video was originally "Second Act Slump", but I changed it to "Second Act, Third Reich?" after finding the most controversial error[?] in the book. At the time I didn't realize I'd be making a whole other video -- "Three Ways to Hitler!!!" -- on that error[?]. so now that the new video exists, I've reverted this video to its original title. The description below reflects the changed title, however.)

Um...say what? Why on earth would I give this review of ALPHACORE #1 such a provocative title? Well, you'll have to wait until I get to the end of this review of pages 11-58 to learn the reason...but I assure you it's a doozy!

00:00 Introduction
00:42 Good News and Bad News
03:06 Cape Continuity
04:32 Dialogue Problems
13:01 Wrong EmPHAsis
14:53 Late Naming
17:23 "Shift Changes"
18:46 Bad Choices
36:36 Dammit, Joe!
40:40 Editors? What editors?
43:18 Conclusion

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