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A wanderer seeks shelter as the blizzard bears down...
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Whispering spies carry secrets, uncovering hard truths..
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A stranger threatens everyone during a trip to the lobby...
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When a sinister returns, horror settles upon the night shift...
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A guardian's fierce stand to defend home and brethren...
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Buried sunglasses reveal their haunting secret to Bethany...
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A mysterious stream appears in the sanctuary of two childhood friends...
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Guided by a thread, she discovers a magical forest...
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After her mother left, a young girl’s lonely walk led to a new friend...
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Twins discover a nightmare in a restricted hallway while chasing a story...
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Marines explore a battleship in a devastated world clinging to fading hope...
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A bomber is dispatched on a routine bombing run, but its elite magical escort hints at more...
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As a threat looms over his land, a wizard must seek out a dangerous alliance...
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Between a cryptic threat and a hidden bomb, Detective Graves is seeking to beat the clock...
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After a rogue wizard’s flees, the council's hunter closes in ready to enforce their will...
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As a storm consumes a cloaked figure, she's ambushed by a quartet of outlaws...
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A deadly game of cat and mouse through a maze of decaying cars, debris, and junk...
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As Lucious reaches his meeting place, he's approached by a stranger for a mysterious meeting...
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Once upon a time, a father and daughter’s meal is interrupted by a stranger with odd delusions…
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A couple's night out is interrupted by a villain with a dangerous message...
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A private detective confronts a politician in his limousine over a woman's death...
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A disgraced council member ignores warnings from former friends in her quest for power...
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As a young Couple enter adulthood, a Letter changes everything but a Second shatters Patricia...
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In his afterlife, Tully is armed only with questions, will his quest lead to answers…
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A couple's night out is interrupted by a villain with a dangerous message...

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In Birthday Blowout, a couple’s special night out takes an unexpected turn when a quirky and over-the-top villain interrupts their evening, intent on sending a dangerous message. With a mix of unpredictable antics and exaggerated threats, the villain adds a comedic edge to an otherwise high-stakes situation. As the night spirals into chaos, the couple must navigate the tension while trying to regain control of their evening. Set to a jubilant 12-bar blues improvisation, featuring saxophones and a clarinet, the music amplifies the growing tension and playful nature of the villain’s interference.

#suspensefiction #coupleincrisis #comedicvillain #unexpectedtwist #romanticsuspense #actionpackedfiction #campy #laughs

One of the reasons I love NYC Midnight is that the competition challenges me as a writer. For each tale, I’m presented with a random genre that I have to work with, something I’ve brought to my patrons via the monthly genre poll. The reason I embraced this was due to the first prompt that the competition assigned to me, a comedy. To that point, I’d never written one. However, if I wanted to progress in this competition, I needed to produce something. However, my mind being what it is, I raced to the world of camp, specifically Adam West’s Batman.

While I’m pleased, the story got points. It ranked 14th out of the thirty plus members of my group. It was difficult to craft the story I ended up with. Of course, I only had a weekend to write and edit the story. As a result, yes, there are areas of the story I would write differently now. Though that’s something that any author will say with works from their past. However, while I am editing other stories that I’ve written, I’m committed to keeping all the stories I’ve submitted to NYC Midnight as they were.

That said, as I worked to narrate this tale, I still enjoyed the campy humor weaved throughout the story, so I hope you all will see it and enjoy it as much as I did. Enjoy the silliness, my friends.

Support:
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Links:
Dead Man’s Hand: https://www.amazon.com/Dead-Mans-Hand-Forgers-Book-ebook/dp/B0DHY1WMT8/ref=tmm_kin_swatch_0
Birthday Blowout: https://www.stevenmeehan.com/archives/2019/09/09/birthday-blowout/

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