Suno - Mary Sue's Vow

7 months ago
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This was a little song I had Suno generate for all the bad-fan-fiction-writing girls out there who seem to want to believe the major villains in various kinds of stories could easily be redeemed by the love of a good woman (specifically, these writers usually posit, their perfect-in-every-way author avatar characters a.k.a. their Mary Sues). Sadly, as repeatedly demonstrated by an astounding number of naive young women who've fallen for notorious psychopaths in real life, some gals have an unfortunate incapacity to distinguish between their fantasies and reality. As usual for Suno, the generator preferred to do chorus breaks only after two verses, but I made it do a chorus between every verse until it came to the bridge, where I insisted it also place an instrumental break.

Lyrics:
[Verse 1]
He prowls the night, shadows he commands,
Molester in the dark; kids fear his hands.
Serial rapist lurking round the town;
Mass murderer wears a deathly crown.

[Chorus]
Yet I know deep inside, he's got a heart;
I'll change him with my love's impart.
His heart of stone I'll melt and break:
Love's redemption, for our hearts' sake.

[Verse 2]
Megalomaniac's dreams spin wild;
All evil schemes, no mercy mild.
Genocidal whispers, nations fall;
Hell-bent on power, he’ll seize it all.

[Chorus]
Yet I know deep inside, he's got a heart;
I'll change him with my love's impart.
His heart of stone I'll melt and break:
Love's redemption, for our hearts' sake.

[Verse 3]
History filled with bloodshed and hate;
Darkness and doom is to him innate.
World domination etched in his plan,
Cold evil rules this Hell-bound man.

[Chorus]
Yet I know deep inside, he's got a heart;
I'll change him with my love's impart.
His heart of stone I'll melt and break:
Love's redemption, for our hearts' sake.

[Verse 4]
Yet here you stand, stars in your eyes,
Trusting your heart tells you no lies;
Blind to horrors left in his wake.
Girl, you're making a mistake!

[Bridge]
Oh, girl, your heart only betrays
To make you think you'll change his ways.
He's far beyond redemption now;
Can't change him with a lover's vow.

[Instrumental]

[Chorus]
Yet I know deep inside, he's got a heart;
I'll change him with my love's impart.
His heart of stone I'll melt and break:
Love's redemption, for our hearts' sake.

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