How to Fix Plot Holes and Character Flaws: Tips from a Developmental Editor

Rebecca Hartwell, developmental editor, continues with the story savvy series as she tackles how to spot plot holes and character inconsistencies. To help you turn your good story into a great one, learn about editing fantasy novels through writing strong plots and fixing story problems in this week’s episode, Episode 19 of 52-Week Story Savvy.

In this episode, editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] and guest host sla Elrick [suemillsauthor.com], author of contemporary romance of Whispers of New England,standing in for Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] work through how to identify common pitfalls that lead to plot holes, contradictions, and character inconsistencies. They also cover how to use fresh eyes and feedback effectively without compromising your creative vision.

You’ll learn techniques to:
Detect inconsistencies and contradictions like a new reader would
Repair plot holes without derailing the story
Maintain clear and consistent character goals and backstories
Seed character growth naturally to avoid sudden shifts
Use detailed character sheets to prevent errors
Whether you’re a first-time novelist or an experienced writer polishing your latest draft, this episode offers actionable strategies to keep your story coherent, believable, and engaging for your audience.

In This Episode:
Identifying and addressing plot holes
Evaluating reader feedback effectively
Fixing character inconsistencies
Balancing complexity with clarity
Planning plot repairs without creating new issues
Using fresh techniques to strengthen story logic

Recommended Resources:
Hartbound Editing Services – [https://hartboundediting.com]
Authors’ Alcove Membership Community – [http://authorsalcove.com]
Book Giveaway – [http://authorsalcove.org]
[00:00] Introduction
[01:16] Guest Spotlight: Sue Mills
[03:17] What Are Plot Holes?
[06:11] Solving Significant Plot Issues
[09:04] Handling Reader Critiques
[11:51] Weighing Plot Fixes and Story Impact
[12:30] Methods for Repairing Plot Gaps
[14:54] Spotting Character Inconsistencies
[18:49] Addressing Character Feedback
[22:10] Typical Character Continuity Mistakes
[26:52] Character Development vs. Out-of-Character Moments
[29:09] Shapeshifting Characters and Unexpected Twists