Episode 29: Editing for Depth: How to Build Distinct and Consistent Characters

Looking for developmental editing for characters? In this episode, we discuss editing characters for depth, creating unique supporting characters, and making characters distinct. So whether you're working on character voice development, defining character agency in storytelling, or improving character arcs, this episode will help you apply strong story structure and character roles to your fantasy novel. It's packed with practical insights for anyone learning how to edit your book yourself or aiming to become what makes a good writer great.

Want to improve your character development in fantasy writing? In this episode, developmental editor Rebecca Hartwell [hartboundediting.com] joins fantasy author Agnes Wolfe [authorsalcove.com] to explore how to build compelling, consistent characters that don’t fall flat.

They share how to spot inconsistencies in character behavior, what makes a character feel two-dimensional, and ways to make your cast more distinct—without resorting to extreme traits or stereotypes. Whether you’re editing your first draft or refining your final manuscript, this episode will help you bring your characters to life in a meaningful, grounded way.

You’ll learn:
-How to define your characters through character statements
-Ways to check for and fix character flatness
-Tips for writing believable dialogue and distinct voices
-Techniques for avoiding trope fatigue while still honoring genre
-How to use role, reaction, and motivation to create differentiation