Perfume

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In the beginning, there was only silence.
The kind of silence that hums — a silence vast enough to cradle a thousand worlds.
From that stillness drifted a small, glinting body of ice and dust: 3I / Atlas.
It moved like a question through the black — not seeking, but remembering.
The void had no air, no wind, no scent.
And yet, Atlas carried fragrance.

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The Birth of a Wanderer

Once, long ago, a dying star exploded — its last breath scattering metal and light.
In that storm of cosmic ashes, Atlas was born.
Its skin was painted by the fire of the supernova, baptized in vapor and starlight.
And so it began to drift, bearing within it the cold perfume of the galaxies that came before.

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The Awakening

For ages, it slept in darkness — until a faint warmth stirred it.
A golden star rose ahead: the Sun.
As Atlas approached, its frozen crust began to hiss and crack.
Plumes of vapor burst outward, curling like smoke from an ancient censer.
The comet had begun to breathe again.

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The Scent of the Planets

Its journey through our Solar System was no mere passage —
it was a gathering of worlds.

Near Venus, Atlas tasted the breath of fire: sulfur and storm, acid and lightning.
It left the planet cloaked in the perfume of destruction — the scent of things reborn in pain.

At Earth, it felt softness — the faint aroma of ocean salt, forest soil, and rain.
The living air brushed its tail, and for a moment, the comet carried the scent of memory itself.

Mars greeted it with rust and dust — the dry tang of blood and iron.
It was the scent of endurance, of loneliness carved into stone.

When Atlas brushed past Jupiter, thunder answered.
Ammonia and sulfur, lightning and cloud — the breath of a god at war with itself.
The comet absorbed the chaos, a rank yet electrifying note.

Saturn was gentler — a breath of cold hydrogen and crystal air,
its golden rings shimmering with metallic perfume.
There was beauty in the stillness there, the smell of peace after the storm.

Then came Titan, Saturn’s amber moon, thick with methane and haze.
Its vapors clung to Atlas like sweet resin — a scent between gasoline and honey,
a reminder that life and chemistry were once the same word.

Uranus offered a stranger perfume: frozen rot and faint sweetness,
a chemical echo of something long forgotten.
It was the smell of time — quiet, unsettling, eternal.

And at the edge, Neptune, deep blue and sighing.
Its atmosphere shimmered like incense smoke over an invisible sea,
a melancholy fragrance — the perfume of frozen dreams.

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The Alchemy of the Sun

At last, Atlas reached its closest dance with the Sun.
Heat and radiation tore open its crust; its frozen gases ignited in color and flame.
What was once dormant now exhaled with divine fury.
The comet’s tail unfurled into a ribbon of burning perfume —
Venus’s sulfur, Earth’s ozone, Mars’s iron, Jupiter’s thunder, Saturn’s silver,
Uranus’s decay, Neptune’s melancholy — all fused into one blinding scent.

The Sun was not a destroyer, but an alchemist.
In its fire, Atlas became something new —
not ice, not rock, but essence.

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The Perfumed Body

When the light softened, and the comet turned again toward the dark,
its long tail shimmered with the memory of every world it had touched.
It carried within it the burnt air of Venus, the ozone breath of Earth,
the dust of Mars, the storms of Jupiter, the hush of Saturn,
the ghost of Uranus, and the twilight sorrow of Neptune.

It was no longer sweet, nor foul.
It was both.
The stench of burning worlds, and the breath of newborn ones —
the scent of everything that has lived and died.
The aroma of creation’s aftermath.

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The Vanishing

Now Atlas drifts outward again, its light fading beyond Neptune’s reach.
Its scent — unseen, unsmelled — trails behind it like smoke dissolving into the void.
But perhaps, somewhere in that trail,
the molecules remember.
Perhaps, in their silent chemistry, the story of our solar system remains —
the perfume of all we are, all we have burned, and all we have yet to become.

And so the comet passes into darkness once more,
leaving behind the faintest trace of fragrance in eternity.

The Perfumed Body of 3I / Atlas —
the incense of creation,
burning forever in the cold.

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